clh3785
14th-August-2008, 06:06 PM
Any Comments would be greatly appreciated, both parts were done in 15 minutes each. About how we can look for love in people, but the only person who will never leave us, never doubt us, and will always forgive us is god. (if you dont agree with my religious beliefs that is fine but if please keep all rude remarks to yourself, but constructive criticism is greatly appreciated)
Puzzle/Pieces.
Puzzle
The memories of what we have done.
A vicious cycle that has just begun.
Like an old puzzle I’m all but whole.
Missing pieces, I turned to you to fill the role.
Ten months later and I still don’t feel real.
The only one not hungry at this bountiful meal.
I am sorry for what I have done,
This cycle of apologies has only just begun.
“The difference between finding what you love,
And loving what you found”
Left my heart far from profound.
But you can only mask something for so long.
He took my weakness, and he made me strong.
The only one who will never leave,
The only one who will always perceive;
The only one who will truly complete;
It isn’t me, and it isn’t you.
My love for him is long overdue.
His gentle cycle has only just begun!
For this is the puzzle; of the son.
/
Pieces
You say you are looking for love and embrace
well, my girl you are in the wrong place,
I can love, but i am merely one candle
in this luminous world.
one plant in an ever growing field
one bite in a bountiful meal.
I let go and he takes the wheel
in this luminous world,
Just one piece that makes the whole.
One note in a never ending song
Once i was lost but now i belong,
he takes the weak
and he makes us strong
so if you need to read a story
in the depths of the night
i cannot be your light
for i may be bright
but i am nothing compared to the sun
(i am nothing compared to his son)
And so to you we extol
these parts that make the whole
you are the film,
and i'm merely a supporting role.
so if you need a savior
you shouldn't be looking for me
judging by my behavior
i think we'd all agree
only man, i turn and run
for i am nothing compared to the son
Puzzle/Pieces.
Puzzle
The memories of what we have done.
A vicious cycle that has just begun.
Like an old puzzle I’m all but whole.
Missing pieces, I turned to you to fill the role.
Ten months later and I still don’t feel real.
The only one not hungry at this bountiful meal.
I am sorry for what I have done,
This cycle of apologies has only just begun.
“The difference between finding what you love,
And loving what you found”
Left my heart far from profound.
But you can only mask something for so long.
He took my weakness, and he made me strong.
The only one who will never leave,
The only one who will always perceive;
The only one who will truly complete;
It isn’t me, and it isn’t you.
My love for him is long overdue.
His gentle cycle has only just begun!
For this is the puzzle; of the son.
/
Pieces
You say you are looking for love and embrace
well, my girl you are in the wrong place,
I can love, but i am merely one candle
in this luminous world.
one plant in an ever growing field
one bite in a bountiful meal.
I let go and he takes the wheel
in this luminous world,
Just one piece that makes the whole.
One note in a never ending song
Once i was lost but now i belong,
he takes the weak
and he makes us strong
so if you need to read a story
in the depths of the night
i cannot be your light
for i may be bright
but i am nothing compared to the sun
(i am nothing compared to his son)
And so to you we extol
these parts that make the whole
you are the film,
and i'm merely a supporting role.
so if you need a savior
you shouldn't be looking for me
judging by my behavior
i think we'd all agree
only man, i turn and run
for i am nothing compared to the son