Open Battle

[clh3785]

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No Length Limit.


anyone down?

[kip0130]

I'm Down.

[clh3785]

do you wanna start? ive never done one, so id like to go second and try it out for my first time.

[kip0130]

What up gangsta?
strutin around all manly and sorts
talking shit, like you'se the king of the north?
........Pimp please you and your no hoe ass.
Go enroll yourself in a bitch ass defense class.
your gonna need it soon , Ima merk you dead,
Aiming with the infared , Cock and aim at your head,
One shot 2 shot out of that 9' glock fellas
Hit ya head like the punk in good luck fella's.

You say your a pimp and you don't commit suicide.
But by battling me you will have wish you had tried.
do it right the first time and dont come back.
the moment i see you im kicking your ass flat.
Oh by the way have a good time beating that..

Something quick.... I'm a bit rusty.

[clh3785]

holy shit..
gimme a bit, ill be back. haha

[clh3785]

this is bad, and my first time sooooo haha


"talkin shit like your the king of the south"
you needa quit bullshittin and runnin your mouth
you think your high and mighty
and you own the crown
and by god almighty
i won't back down,

you wont do shit with your glocks and your nines
and your mom had to help you write your lines
sayin i should just commit suicide.
but now your gunna have to deal with hyde
come face to face with the devil himself.
im takin my glock off the shelf
got hit so quick, fell like a bag of bricks
all you'll ever be is just a little dick
his name is kip and he thinks hes the best
but if you dont mind id like to suggest.
take your own advice and end it all
because you cant get up after you take the fall
so go ahead and talk shit kip
we all know youd be the first to jump ship

[mabrymusic]

battle with you?
looks like i'm battling two
pacman with two guns
claiming he's half-weezy too
you leavin' this open?
half your cranium's open
when i split that shit hopin'
that i'm finished with you

and you can rise from the dead
like a messiah misled
crucified in a post
in a forum i'll boast
and don't think i forgot
about the other one involved
show me half your face
i got the mystery solved
stay in massachusetts
you're joking, it's useless

i'm firing warning shots now
leaving you wounded but breathing
while you're wondering how
and from where you're still bleeding
i'm feeding on you
like a parasitic itch
like that tapeworm inside you
making you twitch

and when i'm finished
let these other pussies release you
you're making it too easy
for me to defeat you...

*first time for me too-not used to writing raplines*
cool idea tho

[clh3785]

yeah, i am used to writing poetry, raps a completely different ball game.

[kip0130]

battle with you?
looks like i'm battling two
pacman with two guns
claiming he's half-weezy too
you leavin' this open?
half your cranium's open
when i split that shit hopin'
that i'm finished with you

That Verse was dope.

Your not battlin two
Your battlin a simulation you see
Im like a hydra you cant defeat me
split my cranium open and you'll wish you had stitches
now your battlin five Oh boy now your alive
did splitting my dome open make you a man?
your type is like the economy. Not in demand
so youll sit on the shelf with an empty open hand.

and i didnt forget about you Mr. clh3785
is that supposed to be some chemistry jive?
Oh boy your both alive being lit on a path
like a fire to your ass. Now get moving and show me real class.
And P.S now pick up the Drex your making a mess on my Hot Air 1's

[Memento Mori]

Very bored, feeling encumbered by insomnia. Oh, and about as much a novice as it is possible to be.

Well, here's the end of the freeway,
Cause this now aint a threeway,
Enter Mori, to take it to four,
And once I am done, I guarantee you won't want more,
An imposter here, I may very well be,
And this ain't my scene, but you won't see me flee,
The name is Memento, and you had better remember,
Taking on me means it's your body that I will dismember,
No need for guns, and no need for knives,
It's with bare hands, that I'm ending your lives.
You better beware, 'cause I'm stealing the show,
Kip, Chris, and Mabry, you'd better just go.

[clh3785]

hahah its actually my initials but good one lol

[clh3785]

watch who your messin with ima real og
one if by land and two if by sea. nah make it three.
kip , mabry and that bitch memori.
mabrymusic too, didnt forget about you.
make me nausious just like the flu
is that you getting knocked on your ass?
i dont want memento touchin me, ill have to pass.
i dont swing that way, but i got one for you
his names kip, pacman likes men, who woulda knew

if i was a pimp, youd all be my bitch.
i got more bills than my boy richie rich.
almost forgot to talk smack about my boy mori
rhymes as childish as disneys toy story.
makin sigs is all your good for.
listenin to your rhymes feels like a chore.




(justkidding though mori, haha)

[mabrymusic]

well well well
and where do i start
phase 2 comes as easy
as a cough and a fart
and seeing as how
i've made a few fans
let me re-write the blueprint
and show you my plans

so you're a simulation?
let me crack the code
this is lyrical masturbation
while i'm shootin' my load
and memento? like the movie?
you're all twisted around
and your story's conflicted
do you remember me now?

and kip how can you tell me
i'm not in demand?
looks like i got 3 whack rappers
eating out of my hand
and mr. massachusetts
you said i'm making you sick?
well, that's what you get
when the diet you're on is nothing but dick

and speaking of dicks
you can hop off of mine
and you can hand this microphone
to the next guy in line

*holy shit-y'all got me rolling-this is hilarious*

[clh3785]

if we did the winner of the 2 rounds, id have to see how memento did. but i think that mabry, took it all.

[mabrymusic]

damn...good thing this is on text...cos' i wouldn't be worth shit if i was freestyling live! :-)

[clh3785]

yeah me too

[Memento Mori]

Well, well, well, what have we here,
A dickhead, a tranny, and a cocksucking queer,
And a note to those, who will take me on,
Make a note to not spell my name wrong,
Yes I'm looking at you, Massachussets man Chris,
Let me make it clear, I'm not taking the piss,
Such a silly thing, to make such mistakes,
But it's to be expected, with those from the States,
Be you from North, South, East or West,
My British blood ensures I am the best.

And so to Mr. Hantman, our cocksucking queer,
He's forgetting his words - it must be the fear,
The only words of mine,
From toy story come,
Are the ones of the dildo,
You put up your bum,
I think that's enough,
You ain't coming back,
Go back to your man,
And lick his ballsack.

And next on to Mabry, who likes to wear women's clothes,
He sees a pair of high heels, and thinks "I'd like some of those",
This story ain't twisted,
The narrative's right,
Your inner female, it's clear,
You're too weak to fight,
I think all else will agree,
Your lifestyle is wrong,
Your place is not here,
So do run along.

And lastly to Kip, a rare oddity,
Look at his face, and there is a lot to see,
Those are the facts,
The words are not callous,
As pride of place on his forehead,
Will you find a big phallus,
He talked of suicide,
And cock 'at a head',
But if I looked like him,
I'd want to be dead.

So there we are, the second of two,
This is the end, it's all I'm gonna do,
To end this battle,
We need Kip to drop,
But don't hold your breath,
I'm sure it will flop,
Mind you, neither of yours, were a success or a hit,
Now leave me be, I'm off for a shit.

------

That was fun. As I earlier, I'm about as novice as one could be. Never written poetry, and I rarely, if ever, listen to rap. Certainly nothing better to do right now. And I would utterly suck at doing it vocally.

[kenz]

im taller than you, aint quite six two , but im too sick
i speak over you wit this new diss cos you so short on topics

i ignore the problems wit your verses, dispersin shit structures
no multis, can fault me, this is "stella" rhymin cos all hits struck ya

not drunk but u getn fucked up, ur my bitch, go call social services
this a worthless prick, incompetent, cant fuck wit me, but your stuck wit me

cant think any more lol

[kip0130]

im taller than you, aint quite six two , but im too sick
i speak over you wit this new diss cos you so short on topics

i ignore the problems wit your verses, dispersin shit structures
no multis, can fault me, this is "stella" rhymin cos all hits struck ya

not drunk but u getn fucked up, ur my bitch, go call social services
this a worthless prick, incompetent, cant fuck wit me, but your stuck wit me

cant think any more lol

Mega , Your shit aint up to par.
you lack foresight meaning you cant see that far.
If you woulda jumped in 9 verses ago.
you woulda seen that i shot 2 shots tho.
your 18 and in the streets , Lets do the math
2 years hustling , 2 years down ,
1 year trying to get this rap shot off the ground.
Lets see how many shots it will take to make you hit the ground
Load the clip. 6 in the frame Drop one down for the 1 time
One shot 2 shot No 9 glock fellas,
your body is a twizzler
a red twisted mess,
Now here come the 5,0 so they can pick up the drex

[mabrymusic]

ok, alright let me
get this straight
2 british gangstas
who rhyme but they're fake
and let me think
of all the talent
to come from
across the atlantic
there's dizzee, wiley,
and mike skinner too
shit, even lady sovereign
raps better than you

somebody's mad
called me a transvestite
you got me all wrong
my asshole stays tight
things only come out
they never go in
hey mori, i think
your girl is calling me again
she knows what i got
she knows what you're not
your insomnia kills you
while she swallows my cock

and kip i like your flow
i have to admit
but second place is first loser
when you're following this
so you can act all thug
you can feel like a pimp
here's viagra for your verses
cos your lyrics are limp...

[kip0130]

ok, alright let me
get this straight
2 british gangstas
who rhyme but they're fake
and let me think
of all the talent
to come from
across the atlantic
there's dizzee, wiley,
and mike skinner too
shit, even lady sovereign
raps better than you

somebody's mad
called me a transvestite
you got me all wrong
my asshole stays tight
things only come out
they never go in
hey mori, i think
your girl is calling me again
she knows what i got
she knows what you're not
your insomnia kills you
while she swallows my cock

and kip i like your flow
i have to admit
but second place is first loser
when you're following this
so you can act all thug
you can feel like a pimp
here's viagra for your verses
cos your lyrics are limp...

Limp? i never go soft
Expecially when that trigger goes off.
Your bitch wasnt saying no shit about me being limp.
expescially when i stuck it between her hips.
She grinded and fell when i busted in her lips
But back to you You two time ass.
second place is first loser?
ever heard of the underdog kicking your ass
and when i come up that ladder im stepping on your ass
Cracking your fingers and dislocating bones
and when i get to the top im kicking you down.
the ladder falls and your not getting up.
Because if you do youll be surrounded by a couple of shots.
By two armed fellas , Two pops two shots one fallen fella.
Thats the death of a classic American aftermath.
Welcome to class.
let the schooling begin.

[mabrymusic]

Limp? i never go soft
Expecially when that trigger goes off.
Your bitch wasnt saying no shit about me being limp.
expescially when i stuck it between her hips.
She grinded and fell when i busted in her lips
But back to you You two time ass.
second place is first loser?
ever heard of the underdog kicking your ass
and when i come up that ladder im stepping on your ass
Cracking your fingers and dislocating bones
and when i get to the top im kicking you down.
the ladder falls and your not getting up.
Because if you do youll be surrounded by a couple of shots.
By two armed fellas , Two pops two shots one fallen fella.
Thats the death of a classic American aftermath.
Welcome to class.
let the schooling begin.

*pretty tight verse brother-took me a sec to reply*

I know something about “Underdog”
I think it was a cartoon
So between that and Ms. Pacman
I can’t tell who’s who
I tried to be nice
And I tried to give credit
But you’re broke as fuck across the board
And your rhythmical style is pathetic

So use a bunch of words
And string them together
If we’re lucky you’ll rhyme them
And we’ll say you got better
But better ain’t shit
When you started with nothing
The bar’s set too high
You’ll always be flunking

And take me to school?
You’re out of your mind
You shit verbal diarrhea
In over half of your lines
So here’s some Imodium
To coat your tummy
You might not rap well
But you are kind of funny

So take my advice
And listen to “Drought 3”
If Weezy’s your idol
Then surely you’ll see
All the blunts you might smoke
Won’t make you a star
And all the glocks that you cock
They won’t make you hard

You got something to say?
You better make it good
Too many views on this thread
Are hoping you would
And don’t come back with
Another cartoon charade
Or I’ll come back pissing
All down your parade

[clh3785]

woww

[mrnicksta]

memento you put in quite a good effort there, fair play!

think i might drop summin:

i'm bustin rhymes, just in time
to rush your spine with lush lines
a design defined to confine your mind
leave you perverts inert, and put gay jokes aside
couldn't step to me if you walked to where i reside
presiding is the honourable minister nicksta
reciting some memorable sinister scripture
dividing the opinions of the listener
deciding to slay all and leave the victor
beat you all even with a head start
cos you wouldn't be running shit even if you were wet farts

short, but more focus on the flow :)

[mabrymusic]

that verse was sick!!! quality over quantity...i love that verse

[mrnicksta]

yeah fair play i'm quite impressed with that, i'm usually a real perfectionist with things and spend ages putting a verse together, but that just seemed to flow out naturally, even the punchlines which i'm usually quite bad at. have wrote quite a few tracks with my friends as of late so maybe the practice has helped

[mabrymusic]

yeah, i give you mad props on that...i'd love to hear that verse over a beat...i'm still trying to figure out what to reply to that one! haha

[mrnicksta]

well you never know, i might put it to a beat - me and my friend plan to have an album/EP recorded within a month so i might fill it out to an entire song (or even make it a really short song for fun). not sure whether the album is all gonna be rap based or whether we'll do some other stuff too, but it's just for fun anyways, see how it goes haha

looking forward to your (or anyones) reply!

[Memento Mori]

memento you put in quite a good effort there, fair play!


Hehe. Cheers.

[mrnicksta]

SETS HIM UP....

but i'd still slaughter you hahahaha

...FOR A FALL!

[kenz]

nicksta that was nice yeh, and memento, content wise, i think you beat most in this thread on the earlier pages http://theurbanblock.com/forum//images/smilies/thumbsup.gif

[kip0130]

*pretty tight verse brother-took me a sec to reply*

I know something about “Underdog”
I think it was a cartoon
So between that and Ms. Pacman
I can’t tell who’s who
I tried to be nice
And I tried to give credit
But you’re broke as fuck across the board
And your rhythmical style is pathetic

So use a bunch of words
And string them together
If we’re lucky you’ll rhyme them
And we’ll say you got better
But better ain’t shit
When you started with nothing
The bar’s set too high
You’ll always be flunking

And take me to school?
You’re out of your mind
You shit verbal diarrhea
In over half of your lines
So here’s some Imodium
To coat your tummy
You might not rap well
But you are kind of funny

So take my advice
And listen to “Drought 3”
If Weezy’s your idol
Then surely you’ll see
All the blunts you might smoke
Won’t make you a star
And all the glocks that you cock
They won’t make you hard

You got something to say?
You better make it good
Too many views on this thread
Are hoping you would
And don’t come back with
Another cartoon charade
Or I’ll come back pissing
All down your parade


You can't see the truth but ill show thee,
your as potent as a blind man with epilepsee,
More crippled than superman yea i killed him ,
Just like i did to you .. now your feeling em?
i Rap about guns and illizit shit,
But you rhyme about views and the internets,
Sit back and enjoy this ride ,
im now wide spread than the internets ,
Fillin kids heads with bullshit,
Nigga now i aint gotta pull shit,
Lets so you pull this shit outta your ass ,
Oh wait you ate it now your breath smells like ass,

[clh3785]

i know mine suck,
and kips are usually good, but that last one was kinda weak man

[kip0130]

i know mine suck,
and kips are usually good, but that last one was kinda weak man

Yea. I was rushing and im kinda not thinking.

[mrnicksta]

yea man i weren't feeling that last verse at all, too awkward, disjointed and rhyming ass twice in a row?! previous ones were better

where the reply to mine then guys :p

[debo12]

memento you put in quite a good effort there, fair play!

think i might drop summin:

i'm bustin rhymes, just in time
to rush your spine with lush lines
a design defined to confine your mind
leave you perverts inert, and put gay jokes aside
couldn't step to me if you walked to where i reside
presiding is the honourable minister nicksta
reciting some memorable sinister scripture
dividing the opinions of the listener
deciding to slay all and leave the victor
beat you all even with a head start
cos you wouldn't be running shit even if you were wet farts

short, but more focus on the flow :)

minster huh?More like a joke to me/
that aint a rap u did trick it was poetry/
so potenly I hade to define the word to brokeback/
put a mountain after that n thats where u live at/
I split raps,u spit crap,I fix that,n u return?/
some shit like "wet farts" whats next some "solid sperm"?/
so bumped off or get bumped,fuck off or get fucked/
jump up n get stuck by a thang that that kicks dust/
its not a maybe,in a minute,its a must/
if u under stand the concept then get ya ass up/
n get ready to class knuckles,call me the ready rocker/
southside candy dropper fist pullin street boxers/

I aint done this in a while,+I hate rap battling but there fun;)

[kip0130]

minster huh?More like a joke to me/
that aint a rap u did trick it was poetry/
so potenly I hade to define the word to brokeback/
put a mountain after that n thats where u live at/
I split raps,u spit crap,I fix that,n u return?/
some shit like "wet farts" whats next some "solid sperm"?/
so bumped off or get bumped,fuck off or get fucked/
jump up n get stuck by a thang that that kicks dust/
its not a maybe,in a minute,its a must/
if u under stand the concept then get ya ass up/
n get ready to class knuckles,call me the ready rocker/
southside candy dropper fist pullin street boxers/

I aint done this in a while,+I hate rap battling but there fun;)

You rap elementary , Speak too slow
your like a retard who has no flow.
your punches are spit stupid and so obvious,
You should observe my lines... But you cant copy this,
Cause i flow , and i rap and i rhyme real tight ,
Its like you bringing a pipe to a gun fight,
a pen to a test / let the class laugh and ill do the rest
even if you cheated you ain't gonna pass this,
I set the grade to high / you'll slip and fall/
you ain't getting out of this hole / you can't even crawl /
your like a sped trying to ball / Lets do the math ... if you can keep up/
your a candy man so does that mean your a preacher? /
you ain't dropping no candy on the internet /
The class is over lets see if you took proper notes,
I'll be waiting to hear whats next/

[debo12]

You rap elementary , Speak too slow
your like a retard who has no flow.
your punches are spit stupid and so obvious,
You should observe my lines... But you cant copy this,
Cause i flow , and i rap and i rhyme real tight ,
Its like you bringing a pipe to a gun fight,
a pen to a test / let the class laugh and ill do the rest
even if you cheated you ain't gonna pass this,
I set the grade to high / you'll slip and fall/
you ain't getting out of this hole / you can't even crawl /
your like a sped trying to ball / Lets do the math ... if you can keep up/
your a candy man so does that mean your a preacher? /
you ain't dropping no candy on the internet /
The class is over lets see if you took proper notes,
I'll be waiting to hear whats next/

Man kip u got a good flow let me whip a lil sumthin up!

[debo12]

You rap elementary , Speak too slow
your like a retard who has no flow.
your punches are spit stupid and so obvious,
You should observe my lines... But you cant copy this,
Cause i flow , and i rap and i rhyme real tight ,
Its like you bringing a pipe to a gun fight,
a pen to a test / let the class laugh and ill do the rest
even if you cheated you ain't gonna pass this,
I set the grade to high / you'll slip and fall/
you ain't getting out of this hole / you can't even crawl /
your like a sped trying to ball / Lets do the math ... if you can keep up/
your a candy man so does that mean your a preacher? /
you ain't dropping no candy on the internet /
The class is over lets see if you took proper notes,
I'll be waiting to hear whats next/

Me bringing a pipe to a gun fight well you still stand no chance/
I go swinging with the pipe,bullets boune back n you do the rain dance/
You ain't in my league man,but dude you be more then a rookie/
You got slimmer chances of wining then cookie monster turning down a cookie/
I got slimmer chance of loosing then old folks speeding in a car/
look like you just got back from ya nightly trip to the gay bar/
my rhymes stay put like a bubble gum in a kids pocket/
you've been chewed up n spit out but still is crooked like a lock pick/
my flow u cant handle it,you kinda counterfeit,where u live anyway?In the land of tits?/My rhymes was in the bible of "Reals & Trills/
So chill out....well hell heres a chill pill/See i killed Bill with my arrogant style/
N my pick up lines that have heads bobbin on ya cows,you say "Wow this kid must be a joke?"/Well what ever you say my rhymes still are cut throat,I cut ropes n I dont need a stunt double/The day I was delivered they where like"Damn we got trouble"

[mabrymusic]

i took a little break
so i could hear some new rhymes
but i feel like Big L
battling P. Diddy sometimes
i keep my lines simple
so you don't get confused
you think you're the bomb
but you just get defused

mrnicksta's the best
to step to the plate
now i feel like the amateurs
came back to the stage
i read some shit
about solid sperm??
bitch, that's disgusting
go work on your perm

half of you can't spell
go proofread your lines
and come back to the forum
when you learn how to rhyme
don't skip the beat
and don't fuck with the meter
this takes talent and skill
so far you have neither

you're kind of witty
and you can crack a joke
be a comedian to get rich
don't rap to be broke
kip keeps talking
about being in school
somebody let me dissect
the lines of this fool

i gave you some props
but you're fucking ungrateful
what started as potential
is now just disgraceful
you're a poor excuse for a fan
even Weezy must agree
you're like a groupie
sucking talent vicariously

[debo12]

im to quick fa ya "blah"
pulled out the bomber
im hot right now
but u agree i could be warmer
I see u a Maywhether fan?
y'all must be sharing cuts
or maybe yall some groupies
who be sharing butts
magic-sticks-up-ya-booty
sweat on ya head
ya get a boner by watchin
boxin b4 you go to bed
you aint got no bread
street cred,or no life
u walk out your door n
see a stranger run in
n get ya wife
am I right?well i must be
because even when im wrong
im correct,solid sperm is sick
well u use to liquid on ya chest
ya soaking wet from head to toe
now ain't that lovely?Nice.....sweet?....
Great....Ugly!
Eureka I got's it ur gay im straight
ur wanksta,im me,I love,U hate
Whats the deal?Read my other rhyme n take pill,
chill,dont freak out!Freak in and kill
I can second guess that u go say in ya next rhyme
"that was some whack shit u need to learn how to rhyme"
I know what you go say so dont come at me with that ho stuff
If hip-hop is dead,then hell its done rose up!

[mabrymusic]

:confused:you rhymed 'rhyme' with 'rhyme'....come on man...you got better than that

[kip0130]

i took a little break
so i could hear some new rhymes
but i feel like Big L
battling P. Diddy sometimes
i keep my lines simple
so you don't get confused
you think you're the bomb
but you just get defused

mrnicksta's the best
to step to the plate
now i feel like the amateurs
came back to the stage
i read some shit
about solid sperm??
bitch, that's disgusting
go work on your perm

half of you can't spell
go proofread your lines
and come back to the forum
when you learn how to rhyme
don't skip the beat
and don't fuck with the meter
this takes talent and skill
so far you have neither

you're kind of witty
and you can crack a joke
be a comedian to get rich
don't rap to be broke
kip keeps talking
about being in school
somebody let me dissect
the lines of this fool

i gave you some props
but you're fucking ungrateful
what started as potential
is now just disgraceful
you're a poor excuse for a fan
even Weezy must agree
you're like a groupie
sucking talent vicariously

that shit was dope.
FYI im not a fan of weezy i just liked the render back then lol.

[kip0130]

wow i realized i got no chance here... most of the active members are from a hip-hop forum lol.

[mabrymusic]

nah, you're totally game...you had some pretty sick lines in most of your verses..besides, if there was nothing to pick on you for, it wouldn't be much of a battle :-)

[debo12]

:confused:you rhymed 'rhyme' with 'rhyme'....come on man...you got better than that
well man mike jones do it.lol

[mrnicksta]

...exactly!


haha mabry your last set was nice,! got quite a bit of shit to do today so i'll bust a verse maybe later or summin.

kip, doesn't matter what forums people come from, hardly a measure of skill :rolleyes: maybe we should get a few battles with some structure in? so that maybe we can declare some winners, not just randomly throw in verses everywhere

[kenz]

yeh get some battles one on one goin down, should be cool

[mabrymusic]

i'm down for whatever...gets me out of my usual box of songwriting, poems, etc...just something to broaden my styles i guess....this has been fun...there's a lot of talented folks on here

[debo12]

Hold on im back with some new hits
tighter then tight ass minks
merk ya ass in the street
wash my hands in ya sink

sick shit like slick rick
bad ass like draft punk
flows vica versa then cheerios
higher ya cholesterol in 1 month

Droppin music like Iraq bombins'
solitary music I be pwn'in
hot shit like Harmony hits
some rude like youtube comments

*cough-cough*Bitch dont choke
just release air from ya throat
n if u think u top level
then stop the mediocre ass jokes


U low quailty my man u cant
fade my swagga
I might not spell right
but i bet I got a A+ in English grammar

I be dodging like Spiderman
n releasing energy like a clench
I'm always one step ahead the game
I aint got one ass cheek on the bench

Lazy never came to mind
unlike energetic n' speedy
Hi?"Your Bob on enzyme"
N this is Debo after watching T.V;)

Hell theres really no specific definition to my rhyme
except for Yays,n aw's ,n i cant "believe my frigging mind"
I get grumpy over money,Hell call me Scrooge
man I aint got time for this shit fuck if I win or I lose

Fasho!

[mrnicksta]

lol wack :cool:

[debo12]

lol wack :cool:

Well i cant suit ya style,I mean its way different the Kip,n the other guys,Im more of a southern rapper n we dont battle down here.

[mabrymusic]

i'm hearing nothin out ya
mouth but excuses
you ain't explosive
just "black cats" with no fuses
and you can rap some
but you ain't no u-g-k
go home omarion
and bump some b2k
just let pimp c
rest easy in his grave
don't act all hood
when you're all kid-n-play

and i don't rap like
the rest of y'all
some tennessee pride
by way of chuck-town falls
i can make it sound
intellectual
maybe not "talib"
but i'm conceptual
and don't get excited
i'm still heterosexual
read this one more time
so it's not ineffectual

and then study my words
line by line
and you can flip the script
if it's by design
and before you go
getting all critical
i'll take you out of style
like you were "mystikal"
have you claiming
i've become the metaphysical
then i'll sacrifice your verses
like a ritual


*tried to put something together without getting all vulgar for once!* haha

[kip0130]

*tried to put something together without getting all vulgar for once!* haha

Lemme try that

Hip-hop
and intellectual thought process
To stay revalent an appeal to the moshes
you don't need to flip kilos of herbs
I'd rather flip twenty ton proverbs
and adjectives more forceful
than a punch to the ribs ,
I'd Rather be successful than
have a plethora of momma's
and i'd rather push a benz than a rusty old honda.

What im hearing today has nothing in common ,
B-boys and B-Girls from the two thousands
talkin bout the Whips and the commons ,
but they don't have common sense
Or a flow thats Mos def inately hot
But there not even remotely luke-warm
With the chains on there buck twenty frame
Gone colder than antarctic exploring,
And all the kids adoring , the wrong men grown up without fathers
To be raised by men who aint even fathers
Don't be bothered.

[mabrymusic]

yah kip...nice job....honestly, probably the best verse you've dropped...for real

[kip0130]

yah kip...nice job....honestly, probably the best verse you've dropped...for real

thanks.

[silasP]

the verses on the first few pages were weak haha but they got better towards the end

[clh3785]

lets hear yours then lol

[ROBER-E]

[QUOTE=debo12;32180][B]

sweat on ya head
ya get a boner by watchin
boxin b4 you go to bed

:Dthats funny shit

[kip0130]

the verses on the first few pages were weak haha but they got better towards the end

Lets hear you then?
silent like the night before Christmas ends
Maybe you need someone to poke and jeer you
whats that? speak up we can't even hear you.
Jab to the rib shatter like religion to an atheist.
Lets here your rhymes and lets see what place you in?
heres a map find where you begin,
Start with a topic like where you been.
And try to attack me go ahead heres a free blow.
But when you punch I'm gonna punch back But a little bit meaner.
you wish you did that but under your breath in a harsh demeanor,
But what ever you do I'm gonna back two times cleaner.
Because you gotta stay fluid even in staccato.
but you rock K-fed i rock K-west.
Now compare the two... Who's best?

[kip0130]

Lyrically liberated like WB Duboise
When i speak my words are so carefully poised.
so take them in like poison
Straight to the heart.
Then rush consciously to the brain
my words are designed to eat away at the mucus membrain
and i'll leave your thoughts so crippled.
you thought your mind was stifled
But actually less wicked in the head.
more like a liberation of the lyrically dead
more uprising than Mike tyson and Kimbo Slice
my lyrics are so sliced in staccto but fluid is the motto.

lol. i was stuntin that shit at lunch

[Kenshi]

real quick one

i'll show you lyrical with self absorbed rhymes/
i flow spirtual this is how the lord writes lines/
i light spines on fire your minds desire to shine/
but you could never do that, not clever just wack
im better than that you cant touch mine/
i crush signs/ of hope/ shove nines down throats/
of their owners, i get boners, taking my time to quote/
what i wrote/lies choke/ in their perpetrators epiglottis/
i wreck a novice/ for thinking he can check the progress/
when im on the set im livest/ punch you in the neck with my fist/

someone write back because i would like to go again

[ROBER-E]

heres a quick 8 bars:D

kill a bithc kill a hoe just 2 let the world know
that robs a sycho when i hold the pistol
you soft as cotton swabs you get blowed away
cant be stoped cant be droped cuzz i hold my place
blow ya face with a gague if you try 2 move me
real life scareface this aint no fucken movie
spit lyrics like lugies puff blunts and dubies
touch butts and boobies
fuck sluts like porno movies

[Kenshi]

spit lyrics like lugies puff blunts and dubies
touch butts and boobies

haha i like that shit.

[Kenshi]

do you record Rober-e?

and yeah ill still get back to that. i just got outta the shower now im goin to smoke some reefer.


the more bars by more people the better!

[Jop]

I'm about to start a Musical Massacre since I'm a musical master
I become cannibalistic, my thirst for rhymes and lines become animalistic
Your rhymes get simplistic while mine goes basllistic
The lines I spit get educated and emancipated
There Ain't No Half Steppin, so I followed Steve Martin
Said I had to come with a Full Clip, so I could get a rep
but now I'm set and don't need death after seeing Blackman In Effect
I Let the Funk Flow and let y'all know, y'all too slow and can't flow when I'm at the show
I gotta Flow Forever and sever the clever to let off a terror
Now, it's time to let Erving and the Hero to show who's better
by letting them show up these sucka's since MC's Act Like They Don't Know to Follow the Leader.


Haha just some shit I thought up from a few months back. I'm liking Kip's verses especially the one with the W.E.B. Du Bois reference.

[Kenshi]

watch quick/as the clock tock ticks/you will not stop this/ can you not jock dick/stop your cock block shit/ trying to hault my nut/ you faulty fucks/with a dick catch salty buts/ from sack slappin it/no back trackin it/ you love dick in your ass crack 'n shit/until your limping home/ or back to your car with tints and chrome/ in an instant poem/ i conjoin splints with bones/ casts to limbs/ blast your friends/kick your ass with timbs/ but no timbs, im in, converse i bomb first and last with pens/ nasty gems/ will trash your men/ while your looking for clues/ who was the crook what'd he do/ was there a motive behind the action? well lets call scooby doo/

[Kenshi]

whos goin next lets hear it?

[Kenshi]

anyone?