New Girl (Audio track and introduction)

[J-Do3]

What's up y'all. I'm new to this site, but I plan on checking in from time to time, for friendly battles or whatever. Anyways. Here's a track a recorded a few months ago as the intro to my mixtape. http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7634606

Check it out and let me know what you think. I'll return any feedback on whatever you have be it written or recorded.

[rasaqboy]

not working
http://i30.tinypic.com/244bkg2.png

[J-Do3]

Alright I think I fixed it, thanks for at least trying to check it out though. I appreciate it.

[Shaq74]

welcome and also nice song and good lyrics

[rasaqboy]

Only in Jane can I trust, yea.

Shit was tight girl, keep making tracks.

You might want to [code] your links. No live links allowed. One of the mods will do it soon if you dont.

[greddie]

pretty hot . :) i like it.

[kenz]

i like this a lot, the piano was nice, bass nice, lot of reverb on the scratchin tho??

the hook was amazin, i have too much praise for it. nice one, i cant really fault this in anyway
post up the mixtape when its done :)

[J-Do3]

Thanks for the feedback. If any of you have tracks of writings of any sort just pm me the link and I'll get back at you. I really do appreciate it guys.

Oh and sorry about the live link think. I thought that was only a rule in the other forum. I fixed it though

As for the mixtape, The tracks are done, all of them...the only probably is no cover art so it's mainly just individual songs

[rasaqboy]

try requesting a cover in the GFX forum. Maybe post a couple pics of things you would like on the cover and give a little description on how and what you want on it. I'm sure some members would be glad to help

[kenz]

http://albumwash.com/forum/t18149-p5-anyone-make-beats-or-rap.html
you can feedback my beats if you want
http://www.zshare.net/audio/62474753635399ad/
thats the last one i done, its a mike jackson tribute

[Kenshi]

jane the link did not work for me, do i need to sign up? it took me to the home page not yours. and also you can check some of my tracks at myspace.com/ thecasketfiller im also working on a few things right now

[rasaqboy]

the first link didn't work for me either. I figured out why, she keeps putting that insomnia shit on the end. Heres the real link.
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7634606