Probz gunna drop this in a track

[GenesisDecep]

Lifes mystic my mics paints picture from liquid
quick shit, take the mic and develop a sickness
I stick-with Vocals that build force like erosion
Invoking Thought and provoking emotion
Consuming Comotion with consumers in motion
Assuming it's broken when a new thought is spoken
I'm the brewing storm sparking-the-lightneing
talk-is-enlightening when the right minds are writing
developing a flicker at the end-of-the-tunnel
re-educating broken legs to be that of a runner
the shimmer in the summer i will never be another

The revolutionary without a revolution
The question with no solution
The car that leaves no pollution
The purest with no dellution

Asking Akward Questions, Tasked with the truth
translating my experience in the booth
Questioning Religion with no out come
Agnostic mind set is the conclusion of one
I'm the enigmatic energy ripper
I'm the syntax destroyer of the files you deliver
The lies of polticians and presidents
the mortician that see the evidence
the guy that uses his common sence
I thought that was Just evident

Lyricisms kinda like the pheonix in the flame
Cause previous my brain was feeling all insane
Vexed-up-with-emotion all wrecked-up-in-my-motion
Cause the text was a way of developing a potion

[Kenshi]

nice, i like it

[st00pidN3wb]

change mic in the first line to flow and from to in,that way u dont over do mic twice in two lines plus flow can be described as liquid -other than that pretty good , keep it up

[TombStone]

^That's actually not a bad thought, however changing verses with other peoples ideas sounds hard to do, like its not all you anymore.

But this verse was impressive man, liked it alot.

[Bulldog2846]

You got anymore to this?