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TombStone
20th-February-2009, 01:23 PM
Ratio's don't mean shit...
While 100's calling the shots, millions are taking the hit
Individualism is the curse of mankind
Alot of same views, but a bond is hard to find
Even if there are people, willing to lead
It's hard as fuck to find men, willing to bleed
Eventhough were all thinking 'bout this, sharing frustration
Less than 1% will step up in this situation...
So who the fuck are we to complain?
We're not walking our talk, aren't we also to blame?
Shit...50% of the people are to lazy to vote
And those same people are bitching on who's rowing this boat.
So fuck words, shit, let your actions speak
physical protest is priceless, while talk is cheap...

Kenshi
20th-February-2009, 09:14 PM
Shit...50% of the people are to lazy to vote
And those same people are bitching on who's rowing this boat.
So fuck words, shit, let your actions speak
physical protest is priceless, while talk is cheap...

nice, i like it.

i might post a verse to reply later if im up late again.

shifted
29th-May-2009, 03:13 PM
Damn man, this area needs revival, some quality work in here. Would be sick to have real tracks of it though too. ;)

TombStone
29th-May-2009, 03:36 PM
I got no mic, plus i write more as a hobby. Thanks for the feed though man.

I gotta get to writing again, slacking lately.

Drink_Gas
3rd-June-2009, 08:07 PM
That was pretty damn good. I wish I wasn't too much of a pussy to post up some of my shit. Keep it going!

TombStone
4th-June-2009, 12:00 PM
Just post up man, good feedback to something you created is a great motivator. So thanks.

kenz
4th-June-2009, 12:06 PM
no one can deny this .... english isnt even your first language either? thats ridiculous lol
the actual rhymin is pretty basic though
but you better than english speaking people lol, you should get a mic tho definitly

TombStone
4th-June-2009, 12:16 PM
Yeah, i started learning english at a very yound age through subtitles on TV and listening music. By the time i got english in school i pretty much controlled the basic language so i just took all the tests in the beginning of the year so i had a free hour for the rest of the schoolyear lol. I'm still learning though. These forums make sure of that.

And i know that it's all very basic, but when i write i forget all about multies n shit like that, i just wanna go without delay because my minds faster than my pen and i tend to forget shit...

Props on the feedback though man, love it.

As for the mic, i think that if i'll record, i'll go Dutch, unless i find out my accent in English isn't that bad.

kenz
4th-June-2009, 12:25 PM
thats nice ^ about learning english, i remember hearing a story about the liverpool player ryan babbel being a fan of dutch hip hop and it interested me, have you got anyone to recomend?
if i were you i would rap in dutch, im not a fan of succumbing to the masses, such like english hip hop use to put on american accents in the early 90s, i know its not quite the same to rap in english as oposed to faking accents.... but if i was dutch rapper, i would rap in dutch, but thats jus me personally, im weird like that, maybe too proud or somethin, i duno lol

and yeah maybe il put a couple of beats up in the future :) they aint great, but im gettin there lol

TombStone
4th-June-2009, 12:39 PM
Dutch is so much harder to write though, which makes it more interresting at the same time too.

And i saw what music Ryan Babel liked lol, it's like the Dutch paulwallmikejones type shit. However i can recommend you some really dope dutch stuff.

E-Life (ill 90's hiphop in english)
Check this track, i'll up the album if you want it, classic imo:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OKDkMa3VF8c
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bm50puDhREA

Pete Philly & Perquisite are Dutch aswell, you probably know them already though.

For some Dutch language stuff:
Opgezwolle:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TpfUguHcQ0g
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jCMnulF6x4I


Typhoon:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RbLEYMv9v2E
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2i_TX2GBEA

Opposites (Don't really like these dudes but this track is undenieable):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nx3Ptv6EKMc

I can up some dope stuff if you want, just let me know.

TombStone
4th-June-2009, 12:52 PM
Honorable mentio for Spookrijders, these guys were ill back in the day:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98EC3vMLovY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=McbHLjDyvhU&feature=related

And Extince:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1mNvw1mq88U


Damn man, your bringing me back.

kenz
4th-June-2009, 01:02 PM
LOL @ ryan babel haha :gay:

that top link didnt work for me, but i listened to Opgezwolle it sounded good but obviously i didnt know what he was sayin lol, but ive listened to like romania, japanese, spanish music before so its not a massive problem but with foreign hiphop where the beats are a lot of the time just looped samples and i duno what they are saying i could see myself getting bored you know what i mean?

jus listenin to E-Life - More Days To Come atm, kinda gay about the accent but its really nice though, top quality production it seems, but yeah it would be cool to hear the album if you dont mind?

what i would like to listen to is maybe rappin in englsih but with the dutch accent still LOL!! im a picky bastard

i actually have never listened to Pete Philly & Perquisite, though ive heard the name, jus listenin now and i think il go grab an album of this too...sounds immense

kenz
4th-June-2009, 01:13 PM
Honorable mentio for Spookrijders, these guys were ill back in the day:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98EC3vMLovY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=McbHLjDyvhU&feature=related

And Extince:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1mNvw1mq88U


Damn man, your bringing me back.

Extince - Spraakwater
this track is really nice btw, im likin this, really likin it

Spookrijders - Klokkenluiders
this one too, really different

not feelin the last one as much though

TombStone
4th-June-2009, 01:16 PM
Pete Philly & Perquisite are my favorite artists in hiphop almost, and not cause they're Dutch.

And if you don't want the looped beats, Listen to "Gekkenhuis" by opgezwolle or other Delic beats, this guy is a great producer.

And i don't know if i know Dutch rappers rapping english with a dutch accent lol. You're looking for some Looptroop type stuff i guess. Got no clue where to look.

TombStone
4th-June-2009, 01:26 PM
I'll switch to my own PC in a minute and up some shit for you.

Btw, here's another track from an album that filled with the dopest beats but the most disgusting lyrics (They're created characters, that's why the voices sounds stupid at times), they actually got banned and sued lol, so not nice music but the beats are illl.

LVO Beweging:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bz6W-pCRnXE&feature=PlayList&p=3425F888950C8191&index=0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gArmRe_WJ4o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AbfYE28IYz8&feature=PlayList&p=3425F888950C8191&index=7

kenz
4th-June-2009, 02:00 PM
I'll switch to my own PC in a minute and up some shit for you.

Btw, here's another track from an album that filled with the dopest beats but the most disgusting lyrics (They're created characters, that's why the voices sounds stupid at times), they actually got banned and sued lol, so not nice music but the beats are illl.

LVO Beweging:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bz6W-pCRnXE&feature=PlayList&p=3425F888950C8191&index=0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gArmRe_WJ4o
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AbfYE28IYz8&feature=PlayList&p=3425F888950C8191&index=7

this shit reminds me off esham a bit, horrorcore style, nice strings, ncie vibe. i like it...i think ive got an idea of whats going on

Extince - Spraakwater i love this track haha

but i gotta go mate, thanks for the suggestions and shit....speak later :)

TombStone
4th-June-2009, 02:58 PM
http://albumwash.com/forum/showthread.php?t=17265

kenz
4th-June-2009, 09:55 PM
thanks a lot tombstone, im gonna download now, its nice to hear something original

if you need anythin in the future jus give me a shout and il upload some shit ;)

TombStone
5th-June-2009, 01:32 PM
Props, will do.

debo12
20th-August-2009, 03:54 PM
Thats one of the best verse iv seen in a long time

wii_stain99
5th-October-2009, 07:36 PM
Good ;)