Off The Top

[nicodagift]

Hip hop is dead,
so i'm saying bye-bye.
Fighting the tears,
don't wanna let'em see me cry.
I remember when we met, I was a little pup, wet behind the ears
didn't give a fuck!
His integrity slipping over the years.
Now I gotta search,
on the internet and clubs
yearning for rebirth.
The truth shall set you free
but with this i can't deal,
Hip hop is dead
for real...............

This is fresh like 2 minutes old, but of course comments are always welcome.
Peace and Love.:afro:
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[Kenshi]

hip hop isnt dead its just harder to see
if it was dying, im the martyr to be
the farther the speech
reaches the targets complete
just means it'll last longer than the cars on the street
its still far from a bleak
scarred up and weak
charred and deceased

thats what i got to say to that

comments?

[Cacteur]

They said that about jazz, big bands and blues,
and rock n roll, metal, and many other hues
they called for the coffins, it was all in the news
prepared for the funeral and wrote the reviews,
then like a Phoenix, they all rose from the ooze,
and so will hip hop, so I say you lose.

:D

[Kenshi]

Yeah!!!!! Thats what im talking about my love will never die!!!!!!!!!!

[Kenshi]

and i dislike when i put all CAPS but it doesnt WORK!

[TombStone]

I was gona say your verse was dope kenshi, but then Cacteur came and killed it, very nice both.

[Kenshi]

Cacteur i gotta give you props for your thanked count. you werent here that long but you already made a big impact, CONGRATS!